• Name:Blacksmin

    Age:17

    Gender:Boy

    Race:Hylian

    Height:5'7

    Weight:113

    Appearance: Wheres Black jeans and a lightweight shirt and a cape that covers two swords, on the waist a large sword which is used for strength attacks, he wheres leg weights for training and building speed. He has silver hair and black boots.
    Weapons:2 lightweight swords and one really large one

    Armor:Leather covering a beaded cloak

    Strengths: VERY fast and silent, has good stamina and strong fast, blows from his swords

    Weaknesses: open areas(can't get out of sight and nowhere to run) not good with magic
    beside his basic attacks, is not good with pain or suffering of him or others. He has alot of energy but,once he becomes weak or exhausted he can no longer fight

    Personality:Quiet and loves sleeping and eating

    History:Lived in a small village outside of Hyrule....His village was attacked by a sky god, only a few lived through the attack. The village was nothing more than ashes, his wife to wed was killed along with his 2 brothers and his parents. The few that lived were a blacksmith, a book seller, one trainer (no one nos what he trains) ...now he is to save some other villages from the sky god, he wanted revenge...the god circled the sky suddenly as Blacksmin was about to leave, as it circled it showed its true from.....as a god....and a sky snake.

    He uses his two small swords when he is running fast and in trees or on cliffs.
    His big sword is used IF he gets caught in an open area. This requires the most speed, but once he gets fast enough he can turn the sword so that he can fly** low for a short time.
    Powers:He uses special powers he honed like Black Lust where he can uses any sword, when he uses the small ones he scrapes them against the ground and quickly stops and the black marks from his sword on the ground shoot forward, if he uses his big sword it sparks with power and makes a Strong slash...it has a 50/50 chance of hitting.

    Moves:

    Dark: Black Flame Sorrow----a risky attack enveloping anyone in range in black fire...the more evil the more it burns

    Ragnar?k---one of the most powerful attacks, he opens our dimension with all others...he can choose dark or light Ragnar?k, light uses good spirits and dark uses demons:::::Light eliminates all evil while Dark tortures the evils souls--------

    Water: Black Mist----uses the soul of the wicked captured by his sword and creates a deadly mist--there is a risk though....it can catch any wind and if Blacksmin even takes a breath it in...he to will die

    Water Volcano--- Blacksmin summons water up from beneath the ground and sends large waves careening towards the enemy....this power is mainly used though for his healing powers so the damage when fighting isn't very severe

    Healing------Blacksmin has many healing abilities, he can't use them on himself but can help many in battle, (NO NAMES---Thought up as proceeds)

    Air: Toxic--- a rare move learned only by those who have been to the locked village, a dark cloud starts forming and all (even trees and small boulders) that it touches becomes part of it....if the summoner dies this power keeps getting larger until it consumes all

    Ice: Dirty Freeze--- ice freezes all around with a thin layer of ice, THIS IS ONLY A MOVE THAT HELPS WITH ICE AND WATER ABILITIES, NO DAMAGE....

    Physical only moves:

    Barge Lust- With quick percision Blacksmin runs, jumps and hits using his large sword. This always hits, but does only mere damage.

    Span Kick- He uses a simple kick. As he is doing it though, he twists his body and comes in for a second, then he swings his small swords.

  • A rather good starter, but it needs a little work...

    First, I need a much more describtion on his Bio. It was much too short. Why did the Sky God attack their village? What was the name of the village? Remember, that this is the entire course of your character in summary, up to now.

    Second, I need more detail in his personality other then a simple sentence.


    Fix those up, and I'll have another look my friend. ^_^