Posts by Tywar

    @ Tim: You got on her bad side, thats why you think that :P

    @ Mav: That doesent mean crap man :P

    @ Steel: Shes not that tall... 5'4... You know... it isnt 'tall tall'....

    I personaly think the other Naruto Character. Sweet, shy at sometimes... Helpfull...

    Naruto: Only at few times, I kinda dissagree in a way...

    Zelda: I'm with this choice alittle more than Naruto, but not that much.

    Midna: Its okay... I guess. More like Midna than Zelda or Naruto...

    Yeah, Lets just go with that.

    You guess right Alex, Rock.

    I just dont listen to Rap, I dont know why, I just dont take interest in other music... That kind of stuff just wasnt important to me... I just played Zelda and kept my mouth shut, nothing further...

    I added a Poll to the topic, be sure to vote so I know what the hell to do. ;) =D

    Inside the Great Deku Tree part IV

    Link had not got a good chance to look around before he had encountered the deku scrub, so he takes time to focus. The walls appeared to be a different type of wood but Link could not care less for that. He looks over to the door to his right to figure out that it was blocked. He walks up to the door and tries to shake the barricade away from the door. "Link, strong iron bars block the door, you cant move them with just your arms." Navi says while flying back towards where Link just came.

    "Link, whats this?" Navi asks as she flys above the barred door where Link is standing. It appears to be a silver diamond with an eye in the center hanging over the door where Link was standing at. "Perhaps you could shoot it Link?" Asks Navi while she wonders in her mind. Link takes a few steps back so he could he actualy see his target. "Wha?..." Link mumbles as he pulls out his slingshot. With a single aimed shot, he got a direct hit on the eye of the diamond. Just like the sound of metals hitting eachoter, the eye closes while the iron bars lift from the door. Link begins to walk to the door and stops right infront of it while inhaling to clear his mind. He walks though the door while looking around. It was a pool. This time, he was on the higher ground with a ramp to his left leading down into the water. The water was about five and a half feet deep, but that was not the center of attetion, there is a floating platform in the water leading straight across the pool, but about midway, was a spiked bar blocking the passage. "Link, sometimes you can find usefull things underwater, you should try diving into it sometime." Navi instructed.

    Link begins to walk to his left while looking down at the ramp leading into the water pool. "Woah... What is that?" Link asks while he dips his boots into the murky water that you could bairly see what was at the bottom. He enters the water with a splash with a hover over the item that Link had interest in. Link takes a deep breath and dives down to the bottom of the water with his arm reaching out to the ground. Another of the very same sounds of metal hitting eachoter filled the room and the water which Link was currently in. Suddenly, the water level drops while Link reaches the surface of the water while he gasps for breath. While he takes a look around, he takes his chance to go back up the ramp to the higher level. Link takes his footing and stands up straight while shaking his head while trying to get the water out of his hair. He looks to his left and notices he can now jump onto the platform without getting hit in the head by spikes.

    The nimble warrior jumps off of the higher ground and onto the platform floating on the water. First, it shakes from the impact of his feet, then he can crouch under the spiked bar to the other side. Once he gets to the edge, he stands up and jumps for the other side. He hits the edge of the higher floor and uses his arm strength to pull himself up to his knees, then to his feet. Once he began to think agian, he had saw a block moved to the left, unable to get to the next door. He had walked up behing the tall block up to the opening in the wall, so he could climb up the block, then climb to the door to the next room.

    sorry for not being as descriptive... I'm just getting tired... ;_; I think I should type more though... Thats why I want to post the chapters.

    Try to interfere more dialogues, it's pretty good for as far I read it, though. Though I'd greatly recommend you to use extended vocabulary more often.

    @ Twistkill: Ah... Hm...

    You dont know how hard that is for me though ;_; I have a big bank of vocabulary, but I just dont even know how to spell most of them ;_; So, yeah...