Swan

-Name: Swan
-Age: 16
-Gender: Male
-Race: Half Dark Elf Half Human
-Height: 5,6
-Weight: 8 Stone Exact.
-Costume: (starting from bottom) Black Boots, White High Socks With a Red fierce looking dragon on each side, Jeans with a Dragon-Tooth Belt, Leather Brownish Bands around his wrists with red Shapes(Complicated Looking) Marked on Them, A Half Ripped Black Top with Strange white symbols on it, A tattoo of flames around his neck, Black Hair With a red fringe Down to his eyes.
-Weapons: Two Black Market Daggers With Dragon Tooth Blades. Nothing to special about these expect that they are razor sharp.
-Magical attacks: He can Heal the Wounded But it is limited to only dark elves and only once in a certain period of time, And Mess about with peoples minds.
-Weakness: To Light Attacks and Earth.
-Personality: A Very Shy Person, Doesn't like to be disturbed, Very talkative when wants to be, Not Very outgoing, Always Up for a fight.
-History: Just after he was born, His father brutally killed his Mother on a outburst of rage, hes been brought up in care for the last 15 years of his life. For those 15 years it was hell for him, He never knew what was going to happen next, Always feeling lost and alone, But now hes out on a Mission to avenge his mother; And to try An assasinate His Father. His luck isn't going too well, his brother, Max, Is working with his father to make sure, He doesn't follow through with his Mission. For half a year Swan has been trying to get hold of his father. Max always get in the way before he gets a chance to kill him, Max is very powerful, Every time Max gets involved Swan needs to back off or he would easily get hurt. Only two people have had enough power and guts to hurt Max; There unknown in this point in time, all that we know about them is that one was pure human and one was a dark elf.
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