Posts by Tywar

  • Ocarina of Time

    What is that supposed to mean Twistkill? If you dont like my story, why?

    Inside the Great Deku Tree part III

    Not all is the same. What was the same, was the smell of sap, wood, and water. There was also some vines, a large pool, and some more wood steppings. Link coughs at the intake of the water he swallowed while going into the water. While floating in the green liquid, he takes a closer look at his surroundings. While swimming towards the neer rock of land that was above his water level, his feet touch a platform in the water allowing him to walk properly. He regains his footings to jump over another layer of rock to get to the top. Link lets out a grunt while climbing to the top. He sees a some kind of bronze object on the floor with a wierd symbol engraved on the top on it. Link curiously touches it with his foot witout letting his balanced part of his body onto the object. It appeared to do nothing, but when he put more weight over it, it went down with a sound of metal hitting eachother.

    When the switch slams down into the floor, Link trips over himself, almost finding himself on the floor. By quickly regaining his footing, somthing catches his attetion at the corrner of his eye, fire engulfed a torch object at the edge of the room. He found himself in a pool of curiosity. 'Was there a web just there?' he asked himself in his mind. He looks over to the his right to see another web blocking a door. "If fire can bring down a web... How about we try it?" Link asks himself with a grin on his face. Link brings out a deku stick whom he took from a deku baba eariler, then sets it over the torch which was just lit. It catches on fire with a spark then glows infront of Link's face. He jumps of the ledge, then lands on the lower platform that was closest to him. He runs to the door that was covered in a sticky, giant web, and puts the deku stick onto it while hopeing that the deku stick doesent burn out before the web dissapears before him.

    Link watches the web fall to the ground with a vision of a burning evil falling to its knees. Link can see inside his mind the blackness of a beast he had never even seen before. He shakes it out of his head with his objective in his mind. He steps toward the door while it opens and shuts behind him. This room is different. It had a painted floor that had seemed to repeted in rythems around a bush in the center. "Oh man," Link said. "not another one..." It appears to be another deku scrub. It jumps up out of its hole, and spits a deku nut at Link. Link once agian deflects it back at the scrub and starts to run at it. The scrub is hit, and begins to flee, but before it can run far, link grabs it, and holds it down. "This is too easy." Link says while expceting more from the creature.

    "Ah!" The scrub yelled. It begins to sigh. "Can I tell you a secret if you let me go? Well, to beat my brothers, you must punish them in the correct order. The order is... 2... 3... 1... Twenty three is number one! Heh, good luck!" The scrub says as it runs away. "Huh... Well... I should expect more of a chalange when I come across them!" Link says with excitment.

    Is this too small? Well, I'm sorry. I have to post this before I go to bed, I guarentee, it will have problems in it ;_;

  • Ocarina of Time

    I'm trying my best to update my chapters, I'm trying to think like a writer. You see, I havent... Eh... Read... My own chapters, I recently did, and everything had LOTS of mistakes. I've only revised the first part, but I'm trying my best to replace the others, its kinda hard without a mouse ;_;

    On the other point of this post, I'm also trying my best to keep link In character. You see, I'm trying to keep link like he never played OoT millions of times, he hasnt :P I want him to have troubles while going through his grand adventure, You know? I feel like I'm going through this thing very quickly. This is where you come in, I need your oppinion, I dont care if Its bad or not, if its not, good, why? You see?

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