• Name: Spiff

    Age: 14

    Gender: Male

    Race: Human

    Hair: Brown

    Eyes: Green

    Skin: Fair

    Height: 5,6"

    Weight 160 lbs

    Armor:

    Matter Gauntlets: Lets Spiff be resistant to immense chances in pressure and allows him to survive in space.

    Weapons:

    Sword of Time: Spiff carries a magical sword that is said to be made when time began. Can partly control time but stopping time is not used in battle due to time paradoxes, but he can slow it down. It can also be fused with the elements for a short time.

    Spatial Shield: Used to absorb certain attacks physical and magical. It can absorb some magic and shoot it back with double the force.

    Physical Attacks:

    Pressure Punch: Adds immense pressure to fist when punching.

    Magical attacks:

    Spatial Blast: Hurls a ball of compressed space explodes on impact.

    Pressure: Forces Immense pressure on the area slowing movements, but increasing physical power for all in it can also lessen gravity making things faster but less powerful.

    Spatial distortion: Distorts space as to look the same as surroundings (flawless camouflage)

    Time control: Can Stop, Slow, speed up, bend, and travel though time. Only Time slow can be used in battle.

    Black Hole: An massive area of extreme pressure and bent time destroys all in it's path (not use in battles)

    Fire & Ice: Has the power to use fire and Ice spells.

    Weakness: Is very weak to people that use electrical attacks and creatures that are very fast and unpredictable.

    Appearance: Spiff is a young teen with a fair strong athletic complecture. His eyes are deep green and his hair a dark shining brown.

    Personality: Is normally very happy but is quick to be angered which will make him use abilities he didn't know he had. He is very strong willed and minded.

    History/Bio: a seven year old boy looked out at the horizon and was enjoying a nice relaxing vacation. His dad was gazing through his binocuglasses as if he was looking for something and his mom was cooking on the balcony the air was fresh and meadows as far as the eye could see. everything was peaceful.

    "It's time to eat son!" said mom

    "Ok" replied the young boy, then, all of the sudden there was a huge explosion and there was a giant hole in the and from the hole thousands of soldiers were coming out.

    "Get down son!" his father shouted and the boy obeyed. the father pulled out his custom laser pistol and was immediately shot by a sniper.

    "Noooo" the boy shouted and his mother dove for the boy and in midair was shot as well.

    The soldier's commander ordered the heavy troops to fire missiles to destroy the building. The missiles headed toward the boy and knowing he was going to die he just watched the missiles fly toward him. All of the sudden time stopped. and a sword was floating in front of him. the boy was confused, but he touched the sword. Immediately he was hurled back at such a high velocity he would of been ripped apart if not for the gauntlets.

    Thud. The boy landed on top of his vacation house and looked out at the horizon. His dad was gazing through his binocuglasses as if he was looking for something and his mom was cooking on the balcony the air was fresh and meadows as far as the eye could see. everything was peaceful.

    "Huh? Where am I?" The boy said.

    "It's time to eat son!" said mom

    "huh?" Replied the boy. Then, all of the sudden there was a huge explosion and there was a giant hole in the and from the hole thousands of soldiers were coming out.

    "No, this can't be happing"

    "Get down son!" Both his parent were shot.

    "THIS CAN'T BE HAPPINING!" The boy pointed his sword at the hole and a black hole appeared. All of the soldiers were screaming and confused as the were compressed into nothing. The boy passed out.

    As the boy woke up. He noticed something. he was... older. "It takes that much energy to create a black hole?" The teen questioned. The boy looked upon the destroyed planet that used to be peaceful. And mourned his parents and for the inhabitants.


    Formerly known as Spiff

  • Some parts are godly, so tone those down k?

    The only problems are:

    Sword of Time:

    It can go through Time and space, fine. It should be limited to the amount of energy x how far you want to go. Like full energy to go back a month, or a small amount to go back 5 secs.

    Physical Attacks: Can punch at the force of a car going 50 MpH. Does not kick in battle.

    That is a bit strong for someone so light. Tone it down just a bit.

    Armor: It is eons above technology in the present and dampens magical attacks and physical attacks.

    How about tone it down a bit. How about it resists to certain attacks and such? :)

    Other than some of the bio being repeated, its fine, and I think we can get the ideas.