This is were I'll ocasionally update my poems. I'm starting off pretty simplistic, I still need to get into it. I'm a pretty horribly poet, actually. Though sometimes, if I may say so myself, my poems can be suprisingly amazing as well. Now, either way, let's start off already. Here goes:
Seven Seas of Doom
Seven seas of doom...
I drown in your eyes
You make me feel very comfortable
Whenever I realize I'm actually alive
Hourglass Loving
My hourglass has been flipped upside-down
I try to conquer the world, finding my way through the woods
I'll always love my hourglass
As I have always loved you.
Desk
I'm sitting behind my desk,
I see my daughter in our family picture
She is my precious child, I treasure her
She is so loving, caring and kind-hearted
That is why she is my daughter...
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I don't really know whether these poems are really good at all, so yeah.
I'm hoping for some advice and constructive critism.^_^
