Need a Story title

Shrukan · July 17, 2007 at 8:16 PM

I have a story, and I don't like the title. Reminds me too much of Eragon, so I was wondering if a few people can help me with ideas.

The story is about Shrukan, a 15 year old Scalix (dragon-human), who's step-parents, Argath and Nava Caelestis, were burned to death in their home. He's off to find the master of the Shadow Beast that killed his parents and kill him. On the way he finds a few friends who tag along to help defeat the master. They are Zagar (the spirit wolf), Damuel (God of Fire), Coulbe (God of Ice) (yes Coulbe let me use that name), Agail (God of Wind), and Akina (Goddess of Light).

What I need is a good name grabber for the story. The story is almost like Eragon, but not entirely.

So help?

Happy Mask Salesman · July 17, 2007 at 8:27 PM

Journey of Scales

A Bred Vengeance

Untamed Hatred

I'll think of more later...

zeypherlink · July 17, 2007 at 8:51 PM

star wars
star trek
invader zim

srry lol

u said its like eragon, so why not call it shrukan? just a thought...

Shrukan · July 17, 2007 at 8:57 PM

That's it. I called it Shrukan, but I'm not liking the title. I want it to be a series as well or something.

zeypherlink · July 17, 2007 at 9:15 PM

oh like a book or something...i could think of some pretty good names based off of that basic plot u posted...just give me some time =)

Hector the Specter · July 17, 2007 at 11:53 PM

The Celestial Alliance of Justice
Scales of Rancorous Retribution
A Voyage of Vengeance
A Vindictive Righteousness
The Burning Flames of Justice
The Divinely Collaboration
A Revenge To Avenge
An Untamed Anger
The Fires of Cessation
An Enkindled Hatred
The Ignited Endeavour

Shrukan · July 18, 2007 at 11:11 AM

Keep in mind that Shrukan is a semi-god as well, without any memory about it.

Steelia · July 18, 2007 at 11:21 AM

Perhaps you should reserve a title for later... Say you get deep into the story, and create a very important element. You could use that "important element" as the title.
Almost like how the titles for Wind Waker, Ocarina of Time, Twilight Princess work out. They weren't introduced immediately -- but they are VERY important for the stories they play in.

Shrukan · July 18, 2007 at 11:26 AM

I'm not really sure. Its just about Shrukan getting revenge on the man who contrls the shadow beasts (Avinash Sulfura) and controlling his elemental powers. You do know in the RPG part of this forum that Shrukan can't control his powers perfectly. He has problems with controlling them, lack of sword training, and having an uncontrolable growth spurt (SP??) half way through the story.

He also has a light and dark side, and I hope this helps. :/

X3 AL3X X3 · July 18, 2007 at 4:27 PM

Do you want it to be a series like Harry Potter?

Vaati · July 21, 2007 at 10:13 PM

The legend of shrukan

XD

Hyrule wars episode III: revenge of the shrukan

Shrukan · July 22, 2007 at 8:21 AM

Quote from Vaati

The legend of shrukan

Lol, the original name was Legend of the Scalix.... lol.

Man its hard to come up with a name for this book, but I made Oraca and the Oracle of Beginning easy. lol

Happy Mask Salesman · July 27, 2007 at 1:42 AM

How about... Fluffy random fruit part two!

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