Which is more correct? 0
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Shrukan's Way (0) 0%
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Teacher's Way (0) 0%
Apparantly A teacher at my school (I don't go to her class, but Prince Zora says her way is more correct than mine), says that everytime a person talk, its a new paragraph. Examples:
Quote from My Way?Weak?? The plague drew out his sword and stuck it in the ground, as blood came out of the dead body. ?So very weak?? He looked to the east as the sun soon began to rise. ?Time is sure fast. The sun rises? But soon. Even she will fall before the darkness.? He looked at the sun before the Shadow Sword exploded and the darkness slipped into his body. ?Ayumu lied though. I was sure he said here. Is he leading me in circles?? The plague bit his lip a bit in disgust and shrugged it off. ?Ah well? He knows I?ll keep killing until Balance comes. And when he does, I?ll finally win after these long months??
Quote from Teacher's WayDisplay More?Weak??
The plague drew out his sword and stuck it in the ground, as blood came out of the dead body.
?So very weak??
He looked to the east as the sun soon began to rise.
?Time is sure fast. The sun rises? But soon. Even she will fall before the darkness.?
He looked at the sun before the Shadow Sword exploded and the darkness slipped into his body.
?Ayumu lied though. I was sure he said here. Is he leading me in circles??
The plague bit his lip a bit in disgust and shrugged it off.
?Ah well? He knows I?ll keep killing until Balance comes. And when he does, I?ll finally win after these long months??
Which is more correct? I think my way is more correct, since it just has The Plague talking, and no one else. The "Teacher" way makes you think its someone else speaking.